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*My Blogging Experience*
This was the first time I have ever blogged. Before taking English 251, I knew nothing about blogs, blogging or the blogosphere and honestly, I didn’t care. People would be talking about blogs on the news, in school and in politics – I never had ANY idea what these even were, let alone how to make one of your own. It was never a part of my life and probably never will be again. I understand all the positive influence, networking, communication and expression blogging has on its users, but it really just doesn’t do much for me. Nothing personal, but I really don’t like it. I feel like it is just one more thing I had to do each week. I found myself forgetting about it until last minute then scrambling to get it done by midnight…not my thing. I enjoyed being able to express myself and have my classmates feedback, but I’d rather talk to someone about my feelings instead of writing about them. I’m glad some people take full advantage of blogs though, but apparently I am not one of them. I’m glad I had the experience to blog and learn the VERY basics, but I think this will be it for me. Thanks for reading my babbles!
*Impressive*-Weekly Blog Post #11-
I think my most impressive blog post was week 11 about the horrible incident at Virginia Tech. I think was so profound to me because it was not only about a significant event important to all of us, but I really put my all into writing the entry. I felt it was necessary to dig a little deeper, beyond the surface and question the situation and how it would be handled at Saint Rose. I thought I made my points very clear and concise in this particular post. I knew what I wanted to say and tried to say it using questions to further back up my opinion. I feel very proud of this entry and hope everyone had a similar response when reading it as I did writing it.
This was probably my second best post this semester. This post was also on a serious issue, stress and anxiety in middle schoolers. I not only reacted to the article, but I also added some personal experience to further prove my point. I thought the article couldn’t have said it any better and what perfect timing. I found the article the day after my sister had one of her stress breakdowns saying school was too much. It’s absolutely ridiculous these 12-14 year olds are being forced to grow up so fast. There’s no reason these children can’t have a little freedom in school (besides lunch) to socialize with friends. After all, most schools don’t allow children to be all that loud at lunches anyway, so even then they are controlled. It’s not right we’re expecting these children to take their academics so seriously that they’re getting sick over it. Children should be allowed to have fun while getting an education – that’s what life is all about.
The post I wrote about the “Concrete Angel” video and child abuse in general was also one of my more impressive blog posts. I’m a huge advocate for children’s rights and thus am completely against anyone hurting a child for any reason, in any way. As I stated in my post, “Child abuse is a horrible, disgusting act.” I think this post gave some insight into my thoughts regarding child abuse. The video really made the scene come to life for me. Fortunately I’ve never been a victim of child abuse, but I know many who have and was hoping to make sure they knew I’m on their side. This post was also straight from the heart. It was filled with personal feeling and emotion.
*Not so effective…*-Weekly Blog Post #10-
I wrote many ineffective blogs throughout the semester, but I think my week ten post was one of the weakest. I hope other bloggers understood I didn’t condole stealing in any way, shape or form. I don’t think I emphasized this enough in my entry. Compared to my other posts, this one didn’t have a lot of outside evidence to back up my points and further prove my opinion. I think I just re-iterated what was said in class and threw it together in a blog post, probably at last minute or while I was doing then million other things. It wasn’t really that well-written.
*In the blogosphere…*I didn’t really enjoy the blogosphere all that much. I was excited to see others thoughts and opinions about my writings and what they had to say on their own blog sites. I really didn’t “explore” the sphere as much as I probably should have, so I don’t really understand how it all works. The trackbacks, ping backs and whatever else there was all just really confused me. Necessary? … who knows.
However, I think the comments on my blog post about Virginia Tech were the most touching for me; they really hit things right on the head. Christine’s and Chris’s comments really struck me. I totally agree that it’s our society and culture making these children grow up so fast. I was there once and I really wish I could go back. Kids need to be kids. Life is way too short to ruin that.
Anyway, that’s all I have to say. Thanks for all your insight and comments though, they were great. Have a great summer! Best of luck in the future and … I’m out! J
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Weekly Blog # 12
The article, “Changing teens inspire separation anxiety”, published in the Times Union on April 23rd is definitely one all middle school administration, faculty staff and parents should read. Having gone through middle school myself, I can attest to the enormous amount of stress and anxiety associated with the new school, changing of classes, different teachers for each subject, class periods and trying to “fit in”. Luckily, I went to rural Tamarac High School (the picture next to this article on the TU website today). The elementary, middle and high schools are located in the same vicinity. The elementary school is just across the parking lot from the connected middle and high school. Our 5th grade teachers were also wonderful and very supportive in during our preparation for the transition to 6th grade in that they brought us to the middle school on several occasions for orientations, tours and friendly visits.
Middle school was a challenge. The students had to become so much more independent and well, some just aren’t ready for that at 11 or 12 years old. The workload increased, tests and quizzes seemed ten times harder and now it was like you had to prove yourself worthy of being someone’s friend. Fortunately I adjusted well to this new environment, but I can remember some of my friends and classmates not being so lucky. Throughout all my years at Tamarac (K-12), I saw many of my past teachers on a regular basis. I guess the close-knit relationship with teachers and other school professionals is one of the advantages of going to a small, country school where you know EVERYONE. I loved it
My sister is now 12 years old and in 6th grade at my alma mater. Even though she is doing phenomenally academic wise, she sometimes comes home in tears saying she’s stressed and overwhelmed. I’m sorry, but 12 years old shouldn’t be having such problems. I think some middle schools, even Tamarac, are forgetting that these students are still children and still need the comfort of family and friends. Yes, education is extremely important, but I don’t think all are taking into consideration the changes adolescents are experiencing at this age. Children shouldn’t be discouraged to go to school everyday because of the amount of work being piled on. Obviously it only gets worse, but take it easy .. slow things down a bit. We only live once.
I think this article expresses many people’s concerns with children growing up too fast and how the schools are(n’t) handling it. Children must receive an education, but is there any way to make them feel more at home or at ease inside the classroom?
*For some reason the hyperlink icon isn’t showing up so here’s the link to the article:http://timesunion.com/AspStories/story.asp?storyID=583139&category=REGIONOTHER&BCCode=HOME&newsdate=4/23/2007
6 comments April 23, 2007
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Weekly Blog #11
What the hell happened!? Tragedy has once again struck an educational institution. Just yesterday a horrified nation listened intently as the heartbreaking story of a gunman on a killing rampage at Virginia Tech, in the quiet, normally secure town of Blacksburg, Virginia killed 30 people and wounded dozens more. The killer began his terror in a freshman dormitory at approximately 7:15 am, leaving two young women dead. He continued at least two hours later in a classroom building across the campus ending his killing spree by killing himself after he took at least 28 more lives.
This all to common incident must incite college students across the country to action. How effective is campus security? How can a student or students be shot dead at 7:15 am in a dormitory and the shooter allowed to roam the campus for over two hours before striking again over a half mile away? Why wasn’t the campus immediately and permanently locked down? Why were unknowing students allowed to enter classrooms that would later become battle zones? Why were the first email warnings not issued until 9:22 am, after more students and staff were in danger? Most importantly though, why was the gunman allowed to enter the buildings unnoticed and unrestricted?
I understand where people defending the college and its security are coming from, but either way (whether there were one shooters or two), the college should have taken better steps in alerting the students and securing the campus. Clearly, both the college and security personnel failed miserably.
This tragedy should scare college students everywhere, even here at Saint Rose. We are trusting that our own university has developed a strong security system that can protect us and stop such violence. We need to meet with college administers, question safety procedures and protocols and actively get involved to create the security we deserve. Complacency at Virginia Tech killed at least 30 innocent people. We cannot allow any such event to happen here.
3 comments April 17, 2007
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Just Because..*
Drugs in Brunswick .. Who would have thought!?
While I was searching the Times Union for an article to respond to for my letter to the editor piece, I came across something rather disturbing. Before I get into the article, I think you all should know I live in Brunswick, New York. Some people might call it “Hicksville” or the “Boonies”, which I mean I guess it kind of is, but didn’t everyone say bad things don’t happen in small country towns? Well, they’re all wrong and the article, Brunswick man draws three years in drug case, proves it. I must confess though, I always thought nothing happened in my town either until I reached high school and was amazed at how many students grew, sold and used drugs. I obviously don’t do drugs, they‘re disgusting, but that’s my opinion. Anyway, this article discusses a 22-year-old who probably graduated from my high school being charged with possession. I couldn’t believe the number of drugs police found while searching his home: marijuana, mushrooms, ketamine, hashish and ephedrine tablets. Honestly, what the hell was he doing with all this besides making enormous amounts of profits, ILLEGALLY.
To be honest, I’m glad the deputies at the train station searched his bags (because he smelled like pot). Don’t these people understand drugs are illegal and therefore, you shouldn’t be transporting them? Yeah so people have addictions well guess what .. too damn bad! Does doing drugs really get you anywhere in life, besides jail? No, probably not. I just think they’re disgusting and the smell of marijuana- YUCK! That’s enough to knock somebody over – how unattractive! This is my opinion after all, but I just thought it was shocking to see that these kinds of things are in fact happening in these small rural towns like Brunswick that you don’t hear too much about otherwise. I personally don’t want my town to be associated with some druggie.
2 comments April 16, 2007
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Weekly Blog #10
I thought today’s discussion starter was really disturbing.
First off, I don’t condone stealing whatsoever. I mean I know people have their reasons for doing it, but is it really worth the risk? I don’t think so. I know many people who have stolen on many occasions (including switching price tags, which is considered stealing) and gotten away with it. It makes me sick. Sometimes, I would really love to turn them in, but I just can’t bring myself to do it when the time comes. It really makes me angry because here are all the rest of us, abiding by the law and actually PAYING for the things we buy – wow, what a concept! I think stores need more security and those who do steal need harsher punishments and perhaps even some type of rehabilitation.
Secondly, who the hell steals from a charity!? I think stealing is wrong in so many ways, but what would make a person steal money being donated to feed hungry children? It’s disgusting? Maybe they did need the money, but like someone said today in class, there are definitely otherwise for them to get it WITHOUT stealing from others (especially children) in need.
Stephanie asked the question today about who we thought was to blame for the money being stolen. Personally, I don’t think the mall is to blame at all really. Crossgates is such a big mall for the number of security guards and cameras they have in it. There’s no possible way someone would be able to watch the money buckets continuously. I think we need to get rid of the “Green Jackets” and invest in some security cameras. Also, I think it would have been very easy for someone collecting the money to take off with it. Don’t you? Yes, the mall should lock the entrances, but the whole thing seems sketchy to me. Did anyone see this person taking the money? Did they try to do anything? I wouldn’t think it was an easy task since it was the Vortex type collection boxes, but who knows. Thus, I feel as though the Pastor and collectors are to blame. The Pastor said he was busy with Easter preparation and festivities, but why couldn’t someone else from the church picked up the money or like someone suggested have it collected at the end of each day when the mall is closing? It’s just odd. You can’t tell me someone wouldn’t have volunteered to pick it up if the Pastor had asked. Yeah, right.
Stealing is wrong, especially from a charity donation box, this whole story is fishy and I don’t think the mall deserves any of the blame.
2 comments April 12, 2007
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Weekly Blog #9
Instead of trying to find an article or blog post to write about, I might as well continue on about today’s class discussion concerning the smoking ban. To be honest, I didn’t know issues were still lingering about the law. Since we didn’t hear much after its approval, I figured everything was all fine and dandy. Obviously I was wrong.
Well, as you all know I’m not a smoker, but that doesn’t mean I’m in full support of the law. I am so so so glad they banned smoking from restaurants; however, because I think it’s so disgusting to be trying to eat and have cigarette smoke lingering in the air. There was the smoking and non-smoking sections, but what does that really prevent? It was more of like a “band-aid” (as Aliah would put it *sorry if I spelt your name wrong*). The restaurant was still wide open with no specific room designated for smokers. I am complete for banning smoking from restaurants and food places.
On the other hand though I don’t think smoking should be outlawed at bars. As many of us agreed in class today, when going to a bar you automatically (or should) assume some of the people in there will be smoking. Like I said in class, most of the bars are independently owned and thus can’t afford to go out of business. We also have to keep in mind that bar owners and employees are very well aware that people smoke at bars. Thus, if you don’t want to be around it – DON’T GO THERE! Therefore, I think the optional smoking license is definitely a great idea. Not only would it allow bars to stay in business, but it would also guarantee there would be smoking inside and outside the location. I just think it’s ridiculous to go to a bar and expect people not to smoke. I’m obviously not a huge fan of smoking since it is very bad for your health, but I can’t tell someone they can or can’t smoke while they’re out having a good time. I’m not trying to promote smoking in any way, but sometimes these bars are all people have.
I don’t know, I could go on forever but I don’t want to ramble .. so that’s all for now J I agree with banning smoking from restaurants, but not bars – either get over it or go somewhere else!
3 comments April 3, 2007
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Extra Credit, please O:-)
Well, it’s about time I wrote one of these blogs for some extra credit, not that I need it or anything – haha! Instead of finding an article or writing about a recent class discussion, I thought I’d write about something a little different – Spring! I don’t know about you, but all these discussion starters (including my own) are starting to get me down. It seems like all our world is filled with lately is crime, war and unpleasant events. I couldn’t tell you the last time I heard something uplifting in the news except for the recent Extreme Makeover in Colonie. Other than that, it’s all depressing.
Spring is finally here, can you believe it?! I thought the horrible winter season was going to last forever. If I saw one more snowflake, I probably would have screamed. I don’t think I’ve seen the ground in about a month. It’s nice to look outside and see all the yucky snow melting and sun starting to shine J ! Sure it’s been a little rainy for the past couple of days, but at least it’s warm and it’s not snow! I don’t mind the rain really, I think it’s relaxing – especially at night. Oh, that reminds me – how weird was it to hear thunder rumbling last night?! I was like “Uhh, is that thunder or am I hearing things?” It was definitely awkward for me, but it’s a sign that Spring is finally here!
Spring is the time when everything comes back to life, even I feel more energized to do things. It’s so sunny, warm and cheerful – how could you not? My favorite part of Spring though is when all the flowers start to bloom, you can drive with your windows down and life doesn’t seem so dark and gloomy. I’m so excited J Mom & Dad are cooking on the grill tonight .. you know what that means!
1 comment March 27, 2007
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Weekly Blog #8
After watching the “Concrete Angel” video again, I’ve realized that something needs to be done for these children. Yes, it is a huge issue affecting our society and we are all one person individually, but if we were to come together and fight for better protection of our children – perhaps something could change. I think the video says it all. I couldn’t tell you how many times I’ve seen the video and I still get tears in my eyes. It sends such a powerful message. The video can definitely make someone feel a great amount of sympathy or remorse for these children who are in fact experiencing this horrible lifestyle but also an even bigger amount of anger towards these parents doing this!
Personally, I don’t think there’s any reason for a mother or father to abuse their child. I understand that in some cases, the parents (mostly the mother) may have had the child very young and thus feel it’s okay to take their anger and harsh emotions they have of themselves out on an innocent child. I would think it’d be extremely difficult to raise a child at a very young age, but that’s a consequence both the male and female are very well aware of before having sex. I mean really, you learn these things in like 6th grade now. Not one person can say they don’t know how babies are made! Also, it isn’t right to beat a child because YOU made a mistake. It wasn’t the child’s decision to have sex, it was yours. If someone doesn’t feel they are competent enough to handle having a child at a young age, there are several other options they could look into rather than physically or emotionally abusing him or her.
Also- a few people in class today were talking about whether or not they’d feel comfortable as a teacher addressing this issue. I would certainly put the child first in debating whether or not to tell someone, but I would most definitely confront the issue after ensuring the child would be safe and protected.
Child abuse is a horrible, disgusting act. Something has to be done for these children. How many more children have to die before this issue is further addressed? How many more children have to experience these terrifying acts and then be forced to live with the physical and emotional pain associated with them before better actions are taken to catch these parents? It’s absolutely ridiculous. It makes me sick. I wish I could do something. If you suspect it, SAY SOMETHING!
4 comments March 27, 2007
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Weekly Blog Post #7
Today’s class discussion was extremely depressing, but well worth it. I had no idea Jose only received 17 years in prison for pouring bleach into Xctasy’s eyes, abusing her and Delia’s 9-year-old boy as well. It’s ridiculous. I’m glad the little girl is doing so well, but I don’t think Jose’s punishment should be lessened because of her astonishing recovery. He deserves to sit in the worst possible prison and rot. However, I also think jail time isn’t enough. Like Shannon said in class today, Jose needs something more. Perhaps he should be enrolled in a rehab program or psych ward. There’s clearly something wrong with him – what would ever lead an ADULT to do something like this to an innocent CHILD? There’s no explanation or justification for his actions. They were barbaric and completely uncalled for. It’s disgusts me to know that they are actually people in this world who thinks this type of behavior is okay. What does this say about our society? What are we doing wrong? Why are things like this happening, how are they happening?I am by NO MEANS justifying what Jose did to Xctasy, but what the hell was Delia thinking!? She said she was too afraid of her boyfriend to do anything – well that’s not excuse. She brought her children into this situation and she should have taken a stand even if it meant him beating on her – at least he wouldn’t have been after the children. How can a mother sit back and watch someone (their boyfriend) abuse their children and almost kill one? I just don’t get it. It baffles my mind! What is wrong with these people? If I ever saw anyone lay one hand on my child, I’d have to kill them. No one, especially a boyfriend, would ever get away with doing horrible acts onto my children. Ugh! It’s so frustrating to me that things were able to escalate this far.
I drove by the motel where all of this took place tonight and it just made me sick to my stomach knowing that such things were going on in that very hotel and almost cost a little girl her life. How didn’t someone see or hear this? It’s disgusting. I think Jose needs to rot in jail and have to somehow give back to society whether it’s through rehab or working with unfortunate people and Delia should have serve her measly seven years in prison and NEVER be allowed to see these children again. No real mother would let this go on. She doesn’t deserve to ever see them again. They deserve much better. I can just imagine what their life is like now, especially Xctasy. I feel so horrible for her, I just wish I could help.
I just don’t understand what our society is coming to…
2 comments March 22, 2007
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Weekly Blog #6
Every Irish person’s favorite holiday is quickly approaching – Saint Patrick’s Day! Saturday will be filled with parties, Irish music, Irish dancing, celebration and of course, drinking. This is usually the day when you’ll find a great majority of the population in green, but how exactly did this tradition come about? Well, according to Butcher Man, the tradition began in Ireland (obviously) many years ago. In his blog entry, he claims that St. Patrick declared all Irishmen to wear green to keep them separate from the crowd of monkeys running around. Personally, I think the post was hilarious. Does this myth really exist? Do we all dress up in green clothes and accessories because St. Patrick wanted to keep the Irishmen in the olden days apart from the monkeys that came to chase away the snakes? I know it’s only a myth, but how funny! I definitely got a kick out of it. I’m sure there are several myths similar to this one explaining our greenery, but where did Butcher Man get this one from? It’s creative, but crazy – as most myths are.
I’m not all that Irish, so I don’t know much about the history, but I wear green and participate in St. Patrick’s Day activities because it’s the thing to do. Obviously I don’t go out to drink and party, but I do dress up in green and get together with everyone (haha!). Anyway, I think you should all read the blog post as it’s very funny. Enjoy your St. Patty’s Day! J
3 comments March 15, 2007
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